Nanowrimo: Week 2 Update

Imagination

Imagination

Week 2 of Nanowrimo has just ended and the words are still pouring out. I know that there’s a wall approaching – I can see it in the distance, but every time that I get close to it, it retreats…thankfully.

So, to the word count. It’s growing and, as I write this late on Tuesday afternoon, has just passed the 28000 word mark. I’m well ahead of the nanowrimo graph – which is a grand thing indeed, especially given that I’m off to New Zealand to visit a friend this weekend.

Nanowrimo Word Count – Week 2

Day 8              2178

Day 9              1268

Day 10            2025

Day 11             2780

Day 12             2061

Day 13             3013

Day 14             2094

How am I finding time to write?

Yes, I’m still working my corporate gig, and yes, I’m still fulfilling my social responsibilities. How am I doing it? The story I’m telling me has a grip on me and I’m making use of every single spare moment. I suspect that if I wasn’t enjoying the story as much as I am, the words would not be coming as easily as they have done. It’s still feeling as though it’s writing itself.

Thankfully we’ve finished binging on Season 1 of Designated Survivor, and we’re not going to start Season 2 until December. Even more thankfully, the next season of The Crown isn’t coming to Netflix until December. I don’t think that I could have resisted that sort of temptation.

I’m not adding any new content to the astro site for now, and I’m going a tad easy on myself regarding blogging in general. I’m also not walking as much as I usually do.

I’m writing at the beginning and end of the day and I’m sneaking in a quick thirty minutes at lunchtime when I can. It’s enough to keep the word count ticking over. In short, I’m pretty much writing and working….or working and writing…you get the idea.

Oh, and the herb garden needs weeding and mulching…badly.

And the story?

It continues to change from my original premise. I’m about to do something pretty dreadful to my characters, and because I like them so much I’m having second thoughts about it – and delaying writing that particular scene. I figure though, that if I like them and hate myself for what I’m about to do, my readers will also feel the same – and that, I hope, is a good thing. Besides, this one scene will take this novel from a romance more into the realm of general fiction. Unusually for me, I have absolutely no idea at this point about how it’s going to end.

Although I have a better idea of the motivations of my protagonists than I usually do at this point, I haven’t yet got a great sense of place. This story is set mostly in Sydney – on the North Shore – and partially in New Zealand. The NZ part is easy, but my Sydney chapters definitely need…more…something? More traffic perhaps? Seriously though, much of that depth will come through in the second draft. For now I’m concentrating on getting the words out.

What else?

On Sunday (day 12) I spent all day at a workshop about writing food into your story with the fabulous Josephine Moon. We didn’t just learn about food, we learnt about how food, flavour and fragrance – and the words we use to describe these things – can add layers to the story. That, and reading the current edition of Salt (a locally produced free magazine) gave me some light-bulb moments – including a possible career choice for my protagonist, Kate. Again, that’s the sort of colour that really comes through after the first draft is done – and provides a truly valid reason for disappearing down the rabbit hole of pinterest.

As the story progresses, so too does the playlist. To the early Midnight Oil and Goanna I’ve added some Vance Joy, Gotye, Ed Sheeran, and a little Adele.

What about you? If you’re also doing nanowrimo, how are you going with it? Will you have more words at the end of November than you did at the beginning of the month?

Nanowrimo: Week 1 Update

Nanowrimo

Nanowrimo

Week one of Nanowrimo is now officially done. After a slow start I’m well and truly back on track.

My daily word count for the first week of nanowrimo looks like this:

Day 1  0

Day 2  0

Day 3  2211

Day 4  2818

Day 5  3225

Day 6  2252

Day 7  2548

More importantly, my nanowrimo graph looks like this.

Apart from the slow start – I was in Sydney for work and staying with my parents, neither of which is conducive for creative work – the words have been flying from my fingers.

Already, though, it’s a completely different story from the one I envisaged. That’s probably not that surprising.

This story, working title After The Happy Ever After, is a grown up book and my grown up protagonists have grown up kids and grown-up problems.

Is it a romance? You know, I’m not sure. It’s definitely got romantic elements, and there’s a bit of a second chance at love sort of theme. The idea I’m loosely working towards, though, is more one of reinvention – specifically the sort of reinvention that has a habit of being sprung on you in middle age as a result of life events. As John Lennon said, Life is what happens when you’re busy making other plans. That sort of thing.

I still don’t know how it will end, but I do have a beginning and a middle in my head.

There’s a little bit of me in every one of my books and for this one I’m giving Kate Spence, my protagonist, a some of my history – from the things you didn’t know about me file.

Kate and Neil Spence meet after a Hiroshima Day rally in August 1985. Kate is in her first year at university and is loosely involved in the Nuclear Disarmament Party – and pretty much any other cause that comes her way. She’s marching to make a difference – and because she’d heard rumours that Midnight Oil would be playing at the Quay afterwards.

Neil has not really heard of Hiroshima Day, but he’s at the Quay because he heard a rumour that The Oils would be playing. He’s also one of the lucky ticket winners who got to see them play Goat Island in January 1985. I gave him that because there was no way my parents would have let me go – even if I did win tickets.

(As an aside, does anyone else remember watching that on ABC or listening on the Js? Or is it just me? Yes, I really am that old.)

Anyways, I attended that Hiroshima Day rally – partly because I supported the cause, and partly because I’d also heard the rumours about The Oils and was a massive fan. In fact, I’ve often wondered whether it was some elaborate urban myth designed to help get the rally numbers up. Thanks to the power of the internet geekdom, in the process of researching this book over the weekend I found out that they were touring the US at the time so couldn’t have been doing an impromptu concert at the Quay. There’s one mystery solved. You can thank me later.

What else? I also gave Kate the story about how I quoted Midnight Oil in an economics essay:

The rich get richer, the poor get the picture
The bombs never hit you when you’re down so low 

And yes, I passed.

Finally, I sent Kate and Neil to the Wilderness Society benefit concert in December 1985. I can’t remember whether we were fighting for the Daintree or Kakadu, but I remember Redgum, Midnight Oil, and the Warumpi Band.

In short? I’m loving writing this book. Possibly as much as I enjoyed writing Big Girls Don’t Cry – that was another that almost wrote itself.

Having said that, it could be a very different story by next week’s update.

Nanowrimo – your training program

Last week I told you about nanowrimo – the equivalent of a marathon for writers.

Marathoners pull on their trainers each day and practice. If this is the marathon of writing challenges, the key to success is in the preparation. With November nearly here, it’s time to get started (if you haven’t already) on your Nanowrimo training plan:

1.Decide how you will be writing your novel.

I use the Scrivener app. Here’s 10 reasons why. I love how it sets session targets. I especially love the corkboard – so much that I might just manage a separate post on it.

If you’re writing your nanowrimo novel in MSword or freehand, simply  enter your word count daily into the nano website. You can stay on track, and the graph is cool. I told you about the graph, didn’t I?

2. Have a back up strategy…and use it

Be paranoid. I back up to a hard drive and also to dropbox – just to be sure.

3. Carry a notebook and pen with you at all times. I use a moleskine. It makes me feel like a real writer.

4. Have coffee – or wine – on hand.

I tend to subscribe to the “write drunk, edit sober” theory… not that I take this literally, but you get the idea.

5. Set your targets

Dig your calendar out from wherever it is languishing and mark in your writing days for November. Decide how many days a week can you write? (Hint: be realistic)

5 days?

7 days?

This will determine your nanowrimo daily target.

If you intend writing 7 days a week, you’ll be heading for a target of 1667 words a day.

I go to bed an hour earlier and write there. It works for me – just don’t tell my chiropractor. Quite often I dream what happens next.

I also tend to grab moments wherever I can – in the hairdressers, waiting at airports, during lunch hours. Wherever, whenever. The year my daughter did the HSC I got heaps of words written waiting outside maths tutorials. I felt like I’d been called to the headmaster’s office.

While you have your calendar out, mark in all your commitments – places that you know you have to be. Be honest, and be realistic.

Maybe you can manage a half an hour in the morning before the kids get up and all hell breaks loose, or an hour at night after they go to bed. You might choose to fit it in on a weekend, or get together with friends for a marathon writing session.

However you schedule it, keep to it.

6. Schedule in your down-time

You have to. Getting out for a walk, or a coffee or whatever will help keep the creative juices flowing – and ensure you stay sane. If you want to stay inspired while you’re walking, listen to your favourite podcasts.

7. Expect life to get in the way- it will.

There will be some days where you can sit down uninterrupted at the keyboard and others where you’re clawing 5 minutes here, there or anywhere. Life doesn’t stop just because you’re doing this. Houses will still need cleaning, clothes will still need washing, gardens will still need weeding, and arguments will still need mediating.

In the same vein, there is no perfect year to do nano – it’s what you make of it.

8. If you really want to do it, you will make time.

I recall finishing my first nano experience in 2009 in the airport at Perth.

As well as the normal demands of home and my full-time job, the relocation project I was working on for Perth (and managing largely from Sydney) had blown wide open.

2010 was much the same, although this time the relocation was in Hong Kong and the final chapter was finished at that airport.

On both occasions I carried my notebook with me and scribbled during coffee and lunch breaks. Back in my hotel bed each night I’d transpose my scribbles into real words.

Somehow the word total grew. Having so much on added to the sense of achievement.

In 2015 I spent most of November road-tripping around England, and in 2016 I was climbing a mountain in New Zealand – or, rather, walking Milford Track, which is much the same thing.

9. Run your own race

I’Il go hard the first week of the challenge and, despite the session targets I set myself, usually end the first week well ahead of schedule.

This is good because I tend to hit my personal wall at about the 25,000 word mark – and things slow from there.

10. The middle 2 weeks are hard.

Most stories are abandoned somewhere between 15,000 and 25,000 words. The story is often in the saggy doldrums – enthusiasm is waning and the end is still a long way off.

I find that the efforts of the first week get me through the middle two.

11. What if my story gets stuck?

When I get really stuck, I jump scenes – sometimes writing the end first, other times writing another scene that has jumped into my head. It works for me.

I don’t happen to believe in writer’s block – I’m way too busy for that. If, however, you feel that you’re suffering from this malaise, check out this post: 8 ways to beat writer’s block.

12. What if I don’t know if my idea has legs?

That’s what makes nanowrimo so great- it allows you to explore an idea and determine whether there is really a 85-100k novel in it.

My effort in 2009 was largely semi-autobiographical. It was 50,000 words that will never see the light of day (heaven forbid), but needed to come out of my head. Nanowrimo was the best time to do that. Once those words were out, other ideas started to flood in. I now have a board full of potential stories- most of which consist of a single line. If you want to write something, but need to clear some space in your head first, I’d urge you to use this years Nanowrimo for precisely that purpose.

13. Plotter or Pantser?

If you like to know where you’re going to go with the story and how you’re going to get there, you’re probably a plotter.

If you’re starting with the germ of an idea, maybe a character or two, and just seeing where it leads you, you’re a pantser.

Perhaps you’re a combination of the two? I’m definitely a pantser.

Nanowrimo is a great time to play with something different. If you’re a plotter, why not give yourself the freedom to see what happens? If you’re a pantser, why not experiment with a different technique?

14. Don’t edit

The point of nanowrino is to get the words out, so resist the urge to edit as you go.

15. What if I don’t make the 50,000 words?

So what? You’ll still have more words than you started with.

And finally…

Nanowrimo is meant to be fun, so try not to be too hard on yourself, or do the analysis paralysis thing. Just write.

There’s no judgment, or right or wrong. There are just words – and hopefully more of them by November 30 than there was at November 1.